I was a young explorer of the valley, which created many miracles and stories. Almost five years ago, I came to this valley and tasted the fresh fruit and enjoyed the comfortable breeze. As the time passing, I was more and more familiar with the valley and simultaneously had more and more curiosities to the valley. It was seemingly that the valley did not have the end and the more I got in, the more I addicted in. The charming fairies, the impressive sun flowers and more and more fascinating sights attracted my eyes, arrested my smells and net my heart.
Those fairies brought me great joys and I gave them peace for return, which did not stand for the business bargain with pride but the pleasures we exchanged by heart. But at that time, it seemed that we were enthusiastic in giving perfect to each other and hid anything not so that perfect but good enough in the backside, we could not stop giving but also hiding, one day, it was written that we were tired of giving and hiding, we were exhausted of actuality, we were not capable of turning back and searching for the hope, for both of us was not dare to see the things hiding beside another’s back, which was the most genuine in our heart.
I was walking alone but never stop my steps in exploring in the valley, even in the dark.
In the deep of the valley, dark, cold and loneliness were strong and fierce enough to beat the any freshman like me, but fortunately, when I was concerning about my perseverance to this journey, the fabulous sight presented in my eyes and meanwhile the intoxicating scent overcame my smell. Out of my expectation, there were mountains of sun flowers, which used to appear in my young dream, and they were more shining and more charming in the fact. I was longing to take them along and plant them in the innermost of the valley, where I would finally settle down. I used to generate the fantasy for millions of times that I could have any one of them in my house, and every morning I could say good morning to it and it could greet me with the most enchanting smile, every night I could nourish it with my cherish. I was trying to realize the fantasy and explanted one of them in my house, but it lost its smile and wept away. I was confused about it, and the more I cared about it, the farther it was away from me. I never lose my patience and my passion to discover and achieve but I had much more sympathy to the nature of the sun flowers. As the matter of the fact, they were only able to smile at other sun flowers, but for the sun, even the warmth like the sun, which they just mistook as the smiles from their kinds.
For the secret and sacred valley, I am just a freshman, no matter who I will play, and no matter how I played, I will be continue to discover this ground for the one who brought me in this fabulous and mysterious valley, we are lonely, but we are not single, for we are in gorgeous.

Posted by Alice on June 27, 2010 at 2:58 am
I totally understand what you wanna say, though you should be cautious of the grammar mistakes;-)Anyway, I always appreciate your perseverance of writing essays in English! That is fantastic!Everyone has a dream, at least…. And YOU, sooo many dreams eh? Great! Keep your step, working hard, and take care of yourself!I can’t waiting for seeing you guys!Ciao~
Posted by Yang on June 28, 2010 at 7:32 am
To Alice Yang: 你是对的,我一直没有想好要用一个什么样的时态去写,哎,真是很混乱,哈哈,anyway,看懂就好,哈哈,表说我对自己要求降低了啊,哈哈~我再改一遍,你再帮着看看,哈哈~
Posted by Sara on June 29, 2010 at 11:26 am
hey how r u gorgeous
Posted by Alice Y. on October 11, 2010 at 9:21 am
I am here!! haha~~~